Vulgar
A very creative take on the topic. It was humorous and engaging. I think in order to get all the creativity and references in, you had to sacrifice some flow. But it was a fun read nonetheless.
UnbornBuddha
Your verse flowed well. I had some trouble understanding how the verse related to the picture, which I assumed depicted media's affect on the mind. Hyper-technical constructive criticism: I don't think the term "medical cure" is commonly used. Medical treatment is provided in hopes of obtaining a cure. Anyway, it stuck out in my brain a little.
Vote: Vulgar
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