buddha - i think your closing couplet was the strongest part of your verse. your brevity juxtaposed to franks style made for an interesting battle. i think you bounced around a bit on your concept and took a more topical approach, dangerous choice against a storyteller like Frank.
Frank - did you make your second line two lines on purpose? lol. I enjoyed your spin on the topic, very creative. Well rounded verse, long winded but enjoyable nonetheless. I think your final touches really gave you the edge in this battle.
MVGT Frank for the more enjoyable and well rounded verse. I simply enjoyed his more.
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