the lines were very stretched in this...
not sure how you wanted me to vibe to your flow
Wife beaters to real leaders, we’re all following a script. Our lives are poetic even when they’re nondescript.
Tragic catastrophes occurring around the world, rapidly. Because we don’t know how to live! Actually,
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this was a cool little attempt if you shortened it & twisted it
you have the whole concept of rhyming & have a decent idea on transitions...
but with some adjustments I think you will shape up to be a memorable rhymer
perhaps you will develop a flow that works with your style.
keep it up shep
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