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Old 05-26-2016, 12:26 PM   #5
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Dope verse Frank.

Haha, finally a verse that wasn't too long for me, didn't have any unnecessary words to make it seemed like you rhymed more, and you get no showed. Sucks man.

Anyways, really dope verse. Usually not a fan of using too many of the same rhymes word, ie, celebration, dedication, inspiration, basically all that end in ion because it seems like a cheap way out as far as rhyming, but the way you placed them made sense to me, so that was dope.

Besides that, same typical Frank shit. Bunch of internals, solid story, good stuff man.
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