I got timeless taking this one...
frank I felt like this was not up to your usual standard. I felt like the flow was choppy in places and the plot just didn't work for me... there was def some cool imagery and there were parts I enjoyed, but as a whole it felt like you maybe rushed it or didn't give it your all...
timeless this piece was real dope. I dug it from start to finish, in the middle I wavered for a moment, but got right back into it. Flow was smooth and there were a few parts that I thought were really cool, the black & white chase the rabbit line and a few others... solid writing here.
v/ timeless
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