Cool battle, I thought MMLP had a funny take on it but maybe it was a bit too cliche. Getting into Prince's mind and writing like that was cool though, just thought you could've switched the narration up a bit, maybe use a different point of view to tell the story like first person...it was good but not as good as your animal story IMO, which was dope.
I thought adverse had a cool verse. It was pretty fleshed out and seemed to have a strong current connecting the whole. It seemed like a mental monologue/dream sequence where he's displaying himself to the audience. The verse had a sort of soul to it you can't deny, it was cool yet maybe it would've been helped with a jarring sequence or two sprinkled in to change pace a bit. Overall nice battle.
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