[Kenny the OG]

Your verses put niggaz to sleep, you spread da zzzzzz quicker than the outbreak monkey.
Fucking flunky, u write nothing dope, last quote you had was from an insurance company.
Ehh. I get it, it was almost funny but it didnt hit hard
Soon as I saw your name, I lost all motivation, to take part in this written altercation.
I got as much inspiration, for this to "workout" than a suicidal obese hospital patient.
Nah. Too much wording and u didn't have to put workout in quotes. The connection speaks for itself and tbh it was basis overall. No hate just my honest assessment
I'm P.O'd cause you'll probably no-show, running from bars like you violated probation.
That jus means you a pacifist, who dreads-swinging like a couple fighting Haitians.
prophetic bar. But still I'm just not a fan of the execution. Althiugh this concept could've been dope
That's ok, I saw your bitch in the club, on the other side of the room just dancing.
She a slut bucket, no romancing, I just called her a-cross-fore-head like Charles manson.
I read this in my Dot reach God voice. This is a reach

Idk fam tbh I'm just not a fan of how you're wording your setup/punches. Some of the concepts are oook but don't hit hard to me bc of how u executed it. But I can't hate tho because I'm a firm biever in everyone having their own style and thought process. Keep doing your thing but clean up that wording a bit.