Artifice - fuckin Neil De grasse Tyson up in the bitch. This was hot, like big bang hot. I can't really critique anything, honestly. This was super.
J - killer audio friendly flow, but the repeating words sort of mehhed me, road, buzz, etc.. I like the way you twisted the story, but, like, wtf? What happened to stabbing Julie, or whatever that first bit was about, lost me on why you even included details, but, it was still cool
Vote - art
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