two very different approaches here... i dug the poetic vibe innovator was going for, but i really felt like while it was a cool vibe, it didn't give me enough. While Jesodist could've cut down his verse a bit, his is more complete imo, and it has enough to take the w. If innovator had dropped something a little longer or slightly more complex, it could go the other way.
v/ Jesodist
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