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Frank · 04-13-2016, 10:04 AM

MVGT Artifice

Interesting battle. Liked how Razahs verse came off as an indepth look into Artifices drawn out characters: that emotional aspect Razah brought was missing from Artifices work. Enjoyed Artifices story of the have vs the have nots and the disillusion of grandeur. I remember MagiC distinctively, Welcome back. Ultimately Artifices complexity,vocabulary and arch of his story line won out against the straight edge approach of The Razah

04-13-2016, 10:04 AM	#11
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	MVGT Artifice Interesting battle. Liked how Razahs verse came off as an indepth look into Artifices drawn out characters: that emotional aspect Razah brought was missing from Artifices work. Enjoyed Artifices story of the have vs the have nots and the disillusion of grandeur. I remember MagiC distinctively, Welcome back. Ultimately Artifices complexity,vocabulary and arch of his story line won out against the straight edge approach of The Razah __________________ *VETWORK* Last edited by Frank; 04-13-2016 at 10:06 AM.