mr. j's piece
hawt
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Im allowed to use a gift I was once denied...
one I've taken for granted for most of my life
Im alive I think.. Yes my senses replied.
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before, I enjoyed it briefly. now, it completes me
Im overtaken by Spring as I breathe in deeply.
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the second quote especially. first line is clean af.
nawt
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my standard is lowered, yet immersive
my senses tingle with each diversion.
Rays of light blind me upon emergence
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just seemed forced? big words man. they ain't my friends.
asylum's piece
hawt
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An empty door hangs on the hinge of an animal’s cage,
holding within a handwritten page, weathered and aged.
Well wishes littered with pleasure and rage, a measure of shame,
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layers of plaster arranged and engraved with names and patterns of praise,
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nawt
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It’s pretense keeps secrets from the actors preaching it’s creed,
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possessive!
mvgt: mr. j for a piece that dealt head on with reality.