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Old 04-09-2016, 02:51 PM   #9
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Orc:
Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute
Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute
^ this a decent opener to me, nothing too fancy but alright.

Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam
Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene
^ haha dope to me

Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing
&&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion
^ lol alright

This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness
^ dope punch and nice set-up.

Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad
Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad
^ alright nice.

U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh
Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber
^ wasn't super great but it's okay.

Schaden:
All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards
bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours.
^ ehhhh okay opening

Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about
but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth.
^ wasn't a very hard hit to me.

Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear.
^ punch was cool set-up was just blah.

I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur
Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer.
^ decent decent to me

So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked
ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke.
^ i liked that.

Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean..
won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring.
^ That's a decent way to close as well.

Overall, no hate to either contestants because I thought this was a cool battle but I think Orc wins it pretty convincingly, better set-up and multies and for the simple fact that I just think his punches landed a bit harder, I thought Schaden had some good ones as well they just didn't get him the points to win, keep it going guys.

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