As a whole piece, I couldnt even begin to understand this lmao. Even the individual lines that I did enjoy, I cant say the enjoyment comes from my understanding, I just enjoy some of the combinations of words you put out there.
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stars, pride, stars, stripes. hashed together. harmonized. new trend.
you lens? lens harder. lens better. lens martyr in blue plastic protector,
the baseball cards we appraised when our pastime became our fetters.
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This even made me laugh, although It probably shouldnt have lol. Its just that you lens/lens harder bit got to me for some reason. Anywho, yeah, idk what to think about this. Very cryptic and demanding piece, in the case of the reader anyways.