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Old 03-21-2016, 07:43 PM   #7
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dope showing from both of you...

I honestly prefer timeless style of writing, i find it easier to read, and I really like his use of idioms and wordplay in his writing. That being said, I think Frank's piece did a better job of telling a story and relating to the picture. Cool verses from two talented writers, and had timeless' verse painted a more relatable story to the image, he probably would've got my vote, as it stands though...

v/ Frank
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