This was nice, I enjoyed the flow from the beginning
still not a fan of paragraphs..buuuut this was well done
the rhyming was continious, a few hiccups but nothing major
twas quite an amazing piece my dear friend
passing blame and confusion, faking allusions.. but ill still laugh n admit it, that im the palpable cynic. i get a bit of amusement , everytime i walk in and see'm spewin "truth" to their students
that was nice...keep writing man
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