GC- One thing that stood out on first read was how well you rhymed and it read smoothly (I usually struggle to get yours at first tbh). Took a second read to absorb and its quite an intriguing tale. seeing it from a ghosts (seemingly humanised) point of view was a cool conceptual twist on ‘sweet potato pie’.
Raz – quite a simple take on the topic in my eyes. It read smoothly (apart from nutritious/ delicious), not much wrong with it. Stuck to topic well throughout. Loved the ‘I’m always ready for seconds’ line.
Whatever happened to you name dropping your opponents in verses?! Good job!
I give GC the edge here, storytelling over a longer period was the main factor here!
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