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Old 03-07-2016, 04:31 AM   #8
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THE GRUDGE MATCH IVE BEEN WAITING FOR LOL.. LETS GO!

Adonis- on third read LOL, I think I’ve gathered it, your talking about a writer in a relationship, who turned to the bottle and ultimately has messed up his career n relationship?? few multies in there ;)
not bad, ive seen better story telling from you tbf!

Mr J- first line is sick! Had to type that before I continued reading.. will only get worse from here surely haha! I was wrong, this verse is crazy, described brilliantly throughout, great twist! I think this some of your best work. second best verse of the week ;)

v/ J


haha just seen Adonis getting all the votes... wtf!
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