Netcees - View Single Post - Week 1: MMLP vs. Just Write (JUST WRITE WINS 6-3)

Pinot Grij · 03-05-2016, 05:32 PM

Just Write - technique was good, but there wasn't much flair. I'd say that for the content as well. It was good, but you didn't really push any boundaries. It was safe.

MMLP was more my kinda tone. It was fun, the lines were brief and the rhyming was crisp. When I found out what your content was, I thought it was the perfect route to take. Very good idea and executed nicely.

Vote -- MMLP

03-05-2016, 05:32 PM	#5
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Just Write - technique was good, but there wasn't much flair. I'd say that for the content as well. It was good, but you didn't really push any boundaries. It was safe. MMLP was more my kinda tone. It was fun, the lines were brief and the rhyming was crisp. When I found out what your content was, I thought it was the perfect route to take. Very good idea and executed nicely. Vote -- MMLP __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.