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Old 03-03-2016, 05:32 PM   #2
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I thought this was written quite well, the previous piece you took interest in was also a cypher piece.
Rarely do I find the time to sit & think properly the sporadic rhyming I feel...forms nicely.
I see that you are a fan of Jean Grae which may have influenced the style you brought together
the flow was smooth throughout and I really enjoyed the swift read as I was finishing up
its a refreshing vibe seeing your love for the genre, nice work here..keep writing
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