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Old 03-01-2016, 11:45 AM   #4
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Evis...been awhile since I seen a verse of yours floating about around here...
this verse was refreshing you litter the verse with a couple witty one liners but then I come across this

peep it, burried be the secret knowledge, i speak it
demolish Phoenecians harnessing powers of Egypt.

the walking hexagon, carbon being, 99 elements
alkaline analyst shitting ash and volcanic sediments.
^^^
Those 2 points really stand out to me, they just come across so smooth.
especially the latter, you never see anyone take a step beyond simpler ideas
I feel like you shine in this collab & shows that you still have a particular set of skills
dope work here...


it’s the social conscious that’ll leave you unconscious
Ya simple entendres leave me undaunted
televised revolution, I'm Chris rock at the Oscars
plus I practice Krav Maga on a bed of hot Lava
^^
CHHHYYEEAAAHHH...I love that shit, thats just a dope opener following Evis verse
reminds me of some Wu Tang type ish here, really nice work following that scheme of yours
Im surprised you get slept on as a writer it may be due to your discussion threads & battles
but when you sit down and write a verse like this you showcase your versatility
some braggadocio knowledge dropping pen work....nice shit


overall this was a dope collab, I really enjoy how the blend of styles work together
you both shine in your own way & it makes the read quick but memorable.
nice work fellas
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