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Originally Posted by Pinot Grij
Cool story. Technically Act II and Act III would be the same Act since you don't really change scenes or anything.
tempting the balling fool off his mortal cord
I don't get this line.
Last act is troublesome. You could clarify the story here since it's the most important part.
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Thanks for the feed. I rewrote the last part 4 times and forgot my original train of thought. At that point finishing it was all that mattered. I will rtf.