Uh, not a big fan of timeless' verse this time around.
I can't really explain it, I just didn't "feel" it. The verse was cool, but like I said, nothing really stuck to me. From previous verses of yours I can remember, this is probably the weakest one I've read from you. I usually like the shit you write, not that this was written bad, it just didn't have that little 'umph'
MMLP, I liked how you went with short lines. It kept shit moving along well, flowed pretty smooth, the take on the topic was on point, good verse. One thing I disliked, which, can't nothing really be done about, was how bad skulls / roars didn't rhyme for me... buuttt, I bet that's an accent thing. Anyways, good stuff.
This battle kind of surprised me. Figured timeless would take this based on previous verses, but MMLP dropped a better verse.
vMMLP
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