Exis - Started off slow, and then it began to pick up a nice rhythm while reading it. It was pretty smooth throughout. I thought it could have been a bit more story entailed with the approach that you took. Also felt on some of the lines that you were going for imagery they could have been displayed a bit more vividly to paint the pictures. Overall it was a decent drop and related to the quote. Just felt like something else was missing to really push the verse over the edge.
Triple - Pretty much the same critiques as Exis in a sense. I thought something was missing from the story aspect. This didn't feel to me as it really had a beginning or an end. You just started it in the middle, and it felt like it ended abruptly. It wasn't the smoothest of reads either. I think the one word rhymes have a large factor in the flow of your verse. It's one thing I noticed while reading your other verses as well. The lines aren't overly stretched but you don't seem to find a good rhythm in your writing for the readers to go over smoothly. Bars are supposed to roll of your tongue.
MVGT: Exis - I didn't think either verse was completely sound. Triple's flaws brought down his verse a bit more than exis. I also thought exis had a real nice flow once his verse picked up.
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