Another very close battle here. Jeso you continue to impress me with your topical prowess. Your ability to focus on a single topic has improved drastically over the years and the growth is nice to see. Mechanics has waves of uncertainty however it reads smooth for the most part. I preferred the mechanics, angle, and content direction of timeless however he cut himself short with the length he chose. If it were double the length this would have been a tougher choice but with what was posted Jeso had the more enjoyable verse.
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