Two verses different in so many ways but laid out in a somewhat similar manner. Both withholding certain facts to enforce a 'shock' in the finale. MMLP went with a more emotional approach, and EbH went for the twist factor.
Breaking down the vote, although the battle was comparably close, there was a clear winner in my eyes. MMLP came with a strong piece laced with emotion, however his opponent is a seasoned veteran who delivered a well executed twist piece that had was mechanically sound and polished, and that kept the reader guessing until the final line. Really nice play at the topic.
+1 ErP
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