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Old 10-14-2015, 04:57 AM   #8
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Yeah this nice with it...poetic feel, great flow...solid content.From top to bottom I felt it..mmm where my bitch @ lol.


Waltzing; in motion, free - drawing in the ocean's breeze,
The vibration of the bass is a taste; forever young,
Seldom is it sung, the melody - we held it in our lungs,
Beauty, within a spoken plea, whispered amongst our hopes & dreams.

Through hope, we breathe, lush in ballad,
A floating sea, brushed our palettes,
An open sky, plush, no malice,
Inside we lie, clouds puffed,our palace.

A seasonal sonata; sweet summer sonnets;
Measures brought forth with the hum of comets,
We reached a place ingrained - true love is honest;
Where our faith remained within a budding promise.

^^Chea.

Stay uppity man.
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