2tripple0
No matter how much advice is spewed your way its like you dont bother improving
therefore Im just going to say good job showing up this week, nice performance
that was one weird ass mag you put up this week thank you for your contribution
as for this verse I hope that someone reaches out to you and wakes you up out of your slump
MMLP
you came across more direct in your approach as apposed to your opponent
you also have a more polished touch when it comes to you approach to the topic
as everyone has said you do have a very Larsesque angle in the way you write
it compliments the work you put in here though, clearly overpowering your opponent
towards the middle your work started a little decline but you pick it up at the end
really nice work would have been better a little more fleshed out though nahmean
v/MMLP This was an easy vote for anyone and should have the vote requirements bumped to four
either way MMLP had a slicker verse that came across more focused & thought out
nice work
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