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Old 04-30-2013, 10:54 AM   #14
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SWEEETT

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ARt:
Lol, internet connection line vs flexs pretty much.. Not many connections
Gamble's got this easy

knuckle:

after the fight, rear naked was ok

vs

drag was eh

bad wording all around, mediocre concepts but vince had better attempts

v/vince

Bleak:

after the fight

vs.

on the block

best lines from both, Vince also had rear naked choke that was decent. Really close, I could go either way, but i enjoyed Vince's verse more

v/Vince

Sharp Nine:

Opener, street boss, overall wack

V

Nothing really


Walt bodied Tony tbh. He got it pretty easily

V/Walter


Allen:


You're both skinny as fuck. Prolly got AIDS...but who can blame ya
Sex for you two was like rubbing sticks together...it's no wonder Snoop's a flamer
The Grandpa goes after chicks...when he tries they lose a few tears
Trust me...Anne Frank wasn't the only girl to hide from you for two years

Vs

when you say your underground, its not cause of unpublicized rap tours,
its cause at the first sight of a german, you hide under the floor boards/


V/Knucklehead grandparents, snoops grandparents verse had some good
concepts but the wording came off weak tbh i think knucks grandparents took this by a little imo, cool battle

Split:

notsureifsrs

Snoops grandparents had an okay line in there, I am sure.

Knuckleheads grandparents were not much better but definitely connected more of all fronts. Better wording. A little corny. Doesn't matter, ethered

V/Knucks grandparents

...

OK so you prolly think there is nothing wrong with that.. yall just qouted there verse.. and said one thing about the actual verse..

ie..
concept is good
concept is bad
concept is constant
constant is concept..

The rest of the shit is just like "ohh didnt feel it.."

...............

Are You ready..

IAMBENT:

Knuck's - Funny, relevant, personal, and pretty dope.. I like the style too,easy to read.

Snoops - Wow some funny lines in here, the closer was nice, but the opener was not so great, but understated in an original way.

I think snoop's was more original but Knuck's was harder hitting.

Vote -Knuck's Grandparents

CEREAL:

Kim - this was sick, well structured with a good rhythm to it.. Knowledge of opponent and just all round nice..

That union line was ill :)

John - dude this was cool, i mean you had standard anonymous punchlines that where cool, some witty wordplay.. but no personals, not one.. But your style was still cool..

vote = kimJong Un

BUDDAH:

Obama had the screaming at church line which was pretty funny and the head to toe line was good.

Al Qaeda had unemployment line and the 7 cousins line was lotb imo.

I gotta give this Al Qaeda though. Their lines hit harder imo.

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If yall seriously just wanted us to quote lines and say they wack.. buddah did that and his name still got brought up..
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