Vilgar
I feel like you really went in this week. You do habe your own style
That is unmistakable tbh. Sometimes i feel like you get lost in your
Own world and write like this. Unadulterated poetry. This was awesome
Man i re read it a couple of times which is always good. Though tbh i feel
Like you put to many obscure references i feel only u would know lol. Kind of
Made it a it hard to decipher.
Split.
The progression was key here and i feel you nailed it. Not once did i feel like
It got stale or boring. The story was dope and like i said your progress through
The plot was dam near perfect. I absolutely loved the haunt, want lines. I thought
Those lines added so much to the characters appeal. Dope stuff man great effort
Overall
I think i got split taking this with a piece that although long it was alot more reader
Friendly while vulgar wrote outstanding i feel like split apealed to his audience a bit better
Dope fucking battle.
Split
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