So, Im'a just quote the shit I didn't like.
"Leaving a lifeless being more crispy wing.
Kentucky fried while alive, rendered cheap"
That couplet ruined the piece for me.
YDK:
"Because I still have to clear my computers history."
I thought that was funny, but, it didn't fit well. Should've just stayed serious if ya' ask me.
I liked Rakontur's verse more. The wording was better, and although both had good flowing verses, I feel like YDK's verse was more simple. In this case, it might have hurt him (in my eyes, at least)
vRakontur
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