Fraze
Bar1-Concept had a cool twist I liked. 3/5
Bar2-Felt like wording could've been better. 2.5/5
Bar3-Nah wasn't feelin. 1/5
Bar4-Cool punch, got too wordy 2.5/5
Bar5-I liked the Piccolo play. Again still felt wording could've made this hit harder 3/5.
Bar6-Ehh wasn't the biggest fan of this. 2/5
Overall- 14/30
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Odd
Bar1-Cool thought it had a pop 3/5
Bar2-Yeah I lol'd 3/5
Bar3-Again I liked this. 3/5
Bar4-Was cool. 2.5/5
Bar5-Was cool again. 2.5/5
Bar6-Rhyming in the end didn't end off the sweetest. Thought the concept was cool though. 2.75/5
Overall- 16.75/30
Both came pretty solid, but I favored Odd's concepts a bit more.
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