opener mild
selabit had potential but you kept is basic an simple
bang bust was good
no bars concept played
painful tips was ok but mild
cooked for a minute mild
closer wordy as fuck but had potential mild as is
you improving bro. need to focus on trying to be a little more creative with your concepts man. try and jot down a concept and write 3 bars from it in different ways. go with the one that seems the harshest. that helped me backkkkkkkkk in the dino-text era when I started. you have potential but you still writing text battles like you face to face or something. be a little more creative bro and you'll be straight.
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opener was mild but cool personal approach
hoe show win was dece
I am/nas fan was good
weak lines was nice
loves muff was ok lol
involved in crime was dece
receive this L was basic
bust got this
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