I dig where razah was going with this piece.
Dope pace. Great diction and poetic voice.
Simply put. It wasn't enough. Razah posted to show up.
Or maybe not i dont know. What i do know is i could of used
Some closer to this. God this was goinga great direction.
Budha
I like the slave angle budha took with the industrial rev topic. I thought
It was a dope perspective to write to. Started off great but towards
The middle it got a bit stale. Felt like you picked it up and finished it nicely
Though. That middle is the meat though. I think if razah would of wrote
More he could of won this no doubt. Buddah dropped a more complete piece
In my eyes.
Buddha
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