Quote:
Originally Posted by Swerve
Ace has to beg to get laid, I almost feel bad for the kid,
Some dudes put pussy on a pedestal…he Shanghai towers the shit.
creative concept but the punch isn't harsh enough to be a hard hit
The girls who say yes are ugly, that’s a fact that we know,
You wouldn’t see Ace with a 10 getting blackjack at a casino.
another cool concept but not worded well
When we talk guns, this dude shits his pants lately,
If the heat wave in the air, he runs inside, closes his blinds and turn on the A/C.
a little corny. and the punch is too wordy
His ace in the hole? Some mediocre lines that won’t get a win,
My ace in the hole? Sizing up the plot of land before I bury him.
this was meh. concept is played / simple
Bullet Farm make it rain slugs, boy its gonna get dark,
Closest he got to see-sawed pump action is playing at a kids park.
awkward wording to me
@ Ace |
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ace
Aiyyo
I'll fuckin bruise this mark..
One punch. You'll take longer to get on ur feet than a fuckin evolution chart.
dope concept but you wasted the setup
This is top notch, homie. What I got in store is rude..
When YOU get in the Mix.. whack is the solvent n i'll mop the floor with you.
don't like the wording and this is a little forced
Screw ur crew nigga. These wannabes aint causin no harm..
What kind of dumb fuckin Hicks think they can grow Bullets out from a Farm.
this was kinda a wasted bar. not hard hitting and no real flip.
Now the safety off, hammer cocked, my gun antics insane..
I'll give you the Trig work that'd put mathematics to shame.
meh. simple.
Swerve used to be decent. Now theres barely any enjoyment..
Ur career didnt just missile down. Dude forgot the launch codes for the deployment.
meh as well
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This was an interesting battle. Swerve had some cool concepts, but is probably shaking off rust because he had a few bars that were played or too simple to be effective. If he can keep up with the concepts and work on his wording, I think he could be competitive. i liked blackjack and shangtai towers but neither was fully quotable. the played ace in the hole bar also hurts your verse a little bit.
Ace had a dope opener. I thought he would win based on the strength of that, but the rest of the verse was disappointing. He also didn't really maximize the effectiveness of his concept in the opener because it wasn't set up at all. The rest of the verse seemed a little rushed. Didn't really have any stand out concepts so it wasn't hard hitting to me.
Not really sure what happened cause I saw some nice bars from Ace in the cypher, but i ended up with two almost quotes for Swerve and one for Ace. Ace's was lotb, but he didn't really have anything else. They were about even on misses with trig and mop the floor kinda bad, but not as bad as ace in the hole.
Close battle to me, I feel like you could easily argue for either side. Meh. I think I will go with Ace b/c I really like that evolution chart bar.
Vote: Ace