Thread: krylon sidearm
View Single Post
Old 07-08-2015, 09:40 PM   #3
Mr. J
The Clown Prince
 
Mr. J's Avatar
 
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45


Champed
- Art of Writing League

Rep Power: 59349682
Mr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant futureMr. J has a brilliant future
Default

planets advance stance is angled distinctive discordance spangled aroma
natural coma under willow trees i capture pnuemonia....


sulfuric shorelines on low tide i walk beside em staring at the sun
my laughter is slaughter to leviathans son found a way home
from a zone where i begun thunderdome electric fences beyond the
clouds of legends shrouded henchman phantasm style pull them guns out


this was dope, I liked these sections the most...and that closing line
the rest kind of threw me off, it was a lot to take in at once I suppose...
maybe I'll come back & edit more in once I process it, either way...
as quoted above...dope
__________________
.....laugh....and the world laughs with you
Mr. J is offline   Reply With Quote