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Old 07-06-2015, 02:40 PM   #3
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Oh shit, this was a close one!

Dre had a lot of heat this round, only one I maybe wasn't feeling was the "memory lane" ish and partly because I have a dislike for idioms as I've seen just about all if them done at some point (12 year textcee here, for shame) I understand though some of you guys seen half of what I have so I give you some leeway, that's entirely my personal pigheaded preference but the rest was solid as fuck I can't deny that, your wordings improved a stack!

Listen… It’s a crime scene whenever I’m around… dawg it’s alerting,
If you’re puttin on a murda sho, it’s wack gunbars w/ horrible wording.
You fake as fuck, come to a real hood & watch dude’ll just get flamed,
This faggot’s so see through, I’ll EASILY barium w/ out using an X-Ray.
It’s over when tech’s spray & my guns always known to crush chumps,
If we look this bird’s gun game, he shootin for high scores on duck hunt.
Hush; Why have me spar w/ the worst dude, my gun bars’ll just murk you,
This fag’s the softest thing to bear arms since the last charmin commercial.

I loved that duck hunt shit tbh, can't understand Knuck not feeling that haha! The clean your clock ish just wasn't smooth enough for me that was all

Allen Knight brought that FIRE Pendred shit I thought, dope verse, again stacked with solid hits too to bottom. He's one of my fave reads recently tbh stylistically. First six were all solid back to back, didn't think the Troy line had quite the same impact those first lines hit with, but then he pulled that gutter shit back with the dress up bar:


for a stack, i'll get ur son waxed, shanked & split hoe
once my team Paid in Full, they'll cut'em up worse then Money Mitch bro
all'em bars u jot are trash faggot, im killin fakes
ur Pendred the moment u start writin.. u'll get Wrist locked till it breaks
gotta 44 magnum aimed at ur skull, its lightin gays
sparyin till my Foreclosure eyes faggot & takes your fucking life away
& ur chick always leaves lookin like a 10, da whore is nuts
ur bitch may Dress Up, cuz thats the way im pullin it right before we fuck
come at me about money, my glock makes this faggot hurl
i aint Owen nothin But a shell to ur face till ur blood line extinct like Jurassic World

Yeah that dress up line was worded slick, closer was good but could have been harder yet I still feel like leaving out of the quoteables doesn't do it justice, nahmean? Really close fought battle, it literally comes down to my own personal preference here and Allen Knight just had me leaning his way on consistency with what was quoted. Those first six or so were HARD, he really went in on this one!

Gotta rock with AK this round, good battle bros!
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