disclaimer like before - not experienced with this but wanna help so take or leave it, not offended if you don't wanna count my vote.
aight so
ribbit
this was interesting, stream of thoughty stuff - it looked (to me) like you started with the picture then just let whatever happened happen, which was cool. It had a few weak spots but it felt like a verse or swag and flow drop to a topic.
sn00p
felt like a more standard poetic approach like the one I would find in an english class textbook (not that it's bad, I just associate short lines and ABAB structure with that) but I like that you took the picture, interpreted both what was there and what you could put into it - your verse gave me a sense of what happened next pretty effectively in a concise manner and that was the difference for me
v/sn00p
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Innovator that's vote number 2 for me you can put that into the NBL tab