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Old 07-03-2015, 08:02 AM   #1
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Default The GAWD speaks, v/Junto

My biggest fan... so you in love? That shit ain't cute you need checkin
If I jumped off a fuckin bridge & that was the end of Jun... you'd leap second


I think you could have been harsher w/ this. Concept was cool but execution was mild to me.

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Look how we spendin our time... Saturday night I'm out drinkin Henne wit dimes...
Spittin game at the Bar... This faggot's here PM'in Hi Cronus ;) & sendin me lines
Lol, solid personal.

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I could air you out lay you flat... unfair cuz you ain't never stayin strapped
So I'll take the gun & make u eat the butt instead... u won't need tips from Dre for that
Goneeeee - solid personal.

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You're on here day & night, this the only way you pass time you bitch
Jesus... your Sleep Number the amount of days since last time you did
Hahaha good personal.

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Oh you the king?! bro around me don't get that fuckin tone
Cuz u NOT Lebron... take 6 to ya chest wit the heat & u ain't never comin home
I fucks w/ this.

I try to write how I live... what you rap is nothin like what you've did
Homie ain't hard, no bud tender... I live in Cali, I'll have u delivered right to the crib


I think this had potential, execution was type mild IMO tho.

I hit the 7-eleven cuz me n your mom was needin a dutch
She gettin the Big Gulp special all summer too if we gon keep it a buck

Didn't like this much.

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I'm tellin u bitch. Actin out like u been doin, that's how melons get split
u belong in a circus... keep bein a nut u'll get rolled up in the trunk like an elephant trick
This was nice.

Pretty consistent verse, Junto. Pretty much enjoyed all but the closer, man. Props...

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The 5 Punches Quoted, IMO are the ones that landed nicely/effectively.
The 2 Punches in Italics were potentials that barely missed.

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What a lame faggot. You suck w/ the Pen
You got Fucking Devoured by Tic n you let my vote Get Under Your Skin?


Had potential to be a solid personal/haymaker. Typically don't like bars that end in a form of a question, takes away a lot of the impact, IMO.

That alias shit is str8 FAGGOT. You KNOW it's fake
But it's like that New Recognition Tech
We can Tell you are A Bitch before you even show your Face


You long winded mother fucker... This was stretched as fuck, bruh. Concept OK but execution was mild.

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now let's let down to business. U weak when you scribe
Ill Call tic a Trapdoor Spider
you Messed around w/ that^ Opening... Then got Fucking Eaten Alive
This was nice.

This Liars mine. How lame u are Inquires Minds
Ur like dinosaurs in Jurrasic Park. We know Ur Fake. You ACTUALLY had the Fuzz on you the Entire Time

Didn't like this much and was stretched as fuck, wtf lol?

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Ima chemist w/ words. It's clear you Been just a Bird
Ur shits not Fly. You just Flip n End up Behind My Craft like an Immelman Turn
Ok

U sell dope? I'll rob u . Fuck who funds ya bricks
U think the Grass is Solid Footing. But if You Step? You'll die in the Trap no Punji Sticks

Eh, wasn't feelin this too much bro... I think you could have been a lil more harsher on the execution here. Fell flat for me.

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Won't show ur pic?Bro you coward as hell
But ull know I'm the Greatest when I Reach up N Lift Your Wig..no Interviews w/ Howard Cosell
I liked this. But 2 bars in a row structured the same is kind of corny to me, especially when they back to back.

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This pussy gets ran thru EASY. it's like he lacking a hymen
It'll be Cold as Fuck the way u Die n Amaze... n Now im Jackin ur Shining
Amaze/A maze wp is a pretty old wp attempt but the jack in/jackin as well. Liked the shinning reference. I thought that was pretty cool but an old reference as well. Creative, IMO but not so fresh at the same time. I liked it thou.

Pretty decent verse, Muff. My only complaint is; a few of your bars were stretched like fuck, bro. Try and simmer down you long winded insomniac ass father fucker. Also, as you already know my dislikes for similes lol... I think it's corny to have "like", "Like" and "Like" tie ins which can be formed and more effective/creative if actually used as a metaphor, IMO. But do you. Not really feelin your "New style" per say of writing. Not to mention your structure is weird and the format is hard to follow at times. But overall a pretty consistent verse as well.

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The 4 Punches Quoted, IMO are the ones that landed nicely/effectively.
The 2 Punches in Italics were potentials that barely missed.

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This battle was close as fuck to judge man. Both of these dudes were consistent for the most part and I typically try and stray away from these types of breakdowns but didn't have a choice after reading the battle 5 times. 3 out of 5 of the times I was leaning towards Junto, due to preference but wanted to ensure I gave proper feedback for something as close as this battle. IMO, style preference, Junto but Muff had his ups and downs as well if you look at the actual B4B breakdown. If Muff would have executed those bars a lil harsher, IMO he could have had this battle. I just think Junto's personals were a lot better and more effective then the personals Muff tried to execute on. So w/ that being said... Really nothing more that can be said other then...

v/Junto
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