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Old 05-31-2015, 07:13 PM   #5
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This was pretty legit for a warm up verse. I enjoy dedicated Geno
I'm sure you became aware of who you were up against and wrote a more fitting piece
as for this the flow from the beginning is on some classic Geno shit
the way you grasp onto the concept was interesting at first
but after the second verse I felt it detoured and went off track
that's a personal opinion of course. either way nice work my dude.
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