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Originally Posted by Destroyer
what's going on here?
did razah feed with that Somalia bar?
withholding my vote til I see an explanation
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i think so too, but if u look at the rules thread, flipping isn't actually in there. anyways,
you posting here is lambs to wolves…. of course Some maulin is in order
Raz ain’t getting feed to save his life like kids inside that country's borders..
^some maulin/somalia or even somalian (which is neither the name of the country nor of its inhabitants) doesnt work for me at all. which is a shame, cuz it would'a been a rly direct personal hit w/ wp. but yea. too stretched
concepts so transparent... even Lama couldn’t find a quotable,
you dropped zero bars… Non didn’t no show... he just never noticed you
^aaaite. it's a personal, but not hard-hitting
faggot thought he could contend, pass me then test to best the King,
Razah back with a chance at the title? … pshhht…. not even in the SEC,
^aite
i’m a hard act to follow… he’d need mod powers to censor ether,
he should know he can’t cut it... guess razah isn’t that Sharp either…
^dece, but sharp wp is pretty played at this point. and this isn't even that direct. but yea, kinda okay
….is there even a point in me coming with a closer…
i don’t know… can’t decide, guess i’ll leave it to the voters...
^nah. don't like this kinda line.
vs.
All day I bury fags that carry bags- Your grave is near
When everybody says Frasier' gay we aren't talking 'bout David Pierce
^cool
He's a starving artist, caution: To avoid that, look right here
He's as hungry as Somalia- Wait, even I know that flip isn't a good idea//
^so yea. apparently flipping isn't against this league's rules. but it's still not cool. the bar isn't that gd anyways
They had you on a pedestal, but everything you say is straight dumb
That's the verse you choose to make up, no wonder Mary Kay is bankrupt
^ehhh. pretty basic wp
I know that he admires me but I'd hate to belittle this whore
- Just admit it, that's why you put my name in the middle of yours//
^this coulda been flipped harder, the concept wasn't that bad tho
That's 'bout as gay as it gets, and that's what I call issues
Seriously, it's not a poop chute' no more when it can launch missiles
^nah
well. seems like neither tried to hard here. fraze dropped the ball w/ his closer. those kinda lines never work, unless ur actually a txt legend w/ godly wording. his opener was too stretched. sec was his best line, the others weren't misses but didn't rly hit either. i think this verse cud'a been much better w/ some more time spent on it. like, there were a lotta concepts that would'a been hard hits if u developed the some more. and just don't use lines like ur closer anymore, pls. raz' opener was nice. lotb for sure. next line wasn't good, and even tho u probably can't be dq'ed for feeding (as it's not in the rules), i rly don't like the feeding nor the concept. then ur next two weren't bad but not rly hits either. closer, i didn't like. so each has one hit, but raz' hit was better & the lotb, so i think i gotta give it to him. would'a liked both to spend some more time on their verses, becuz the basics are def there, so i can see yall dropping something rly gd for sure. anyways,
v/raz