05-07-2015, 09:14 AM
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Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army
If I were to pluck an example I would say the line:
laced with similes richer than Saudi Arabia describing'is misery
is meant to be very connected
while the line
but it turned into a multisyllabic extravaganza.
is meant to be noticeably separated syllables
I don't think that problem is solvable on a page but I'm open to suggestions.
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Yeah, true. You can convert these lines into the other style and vice verse.
but every word I spit instead is then transformed in this metamorphosis to become a separate form with many portioned bits
stocked with golden grins. a vault within the halls of a Sultanate- dining on Mercedes rims, sighing exquisitely
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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah
I'm going to start off on a tangent.
when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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