Thread: ZenLand Part II
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Old 04-18-2013, 12:56 AM   #8
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This was cool man I coulda swore I fed this on aob but I guess not lol I loved the approach you. Took wit it not a normal generic swag piece but had some strong flexin. In it. The flow was smooth an muties were good but feel the transitions from rhymes to the seperate/next rhymes could have been smoother. Overall tho it was a strong drop with a unique take, just work on the transitions an you'll have fire bruh. Good shit keep it up
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