Nice piece man. The rhyme scheme was pretty simple but the lines were deep with meaning. The opening was powerful. My favorite line was about the facebook shit. I hate that as well. Post some kind words on facebook to say that you care. If you really cared you'd be helping...but I digress. Very nice piece and fitting for the time after that shit because I feel just like this right now. Frustrated and angry that people could even do this shit. I like it man. Props.
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