Noel - played concept but this worked for me
Late night - i was diggin it, nice set-up
Time in a bottle - felt long but had a sting
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Kneedown - nice current concept
Ecstatic- had potentiaL
Timeless shake off the rust and as everyone says work on wording so those lines pop. I think you can focus less on flow and carrying over rhymescheme and more on the set-ups. Sharp not much i can say other than i dig your set-ups and feel your verses read smooth.
Vote- sharp
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