[Mr. J]

I thought this was pretty cool, long as shit too...
the beginning was starting off pretty cool, but the wording was bumpy
I get what you were trying to say though, it just felt awkward to me
but as we progress I feel like you picked up and really just went all out
which I like, I enjoy the pieces when you go on non-stop because you unload a lot
you make the flow of the piece seem effortless as well as worth the wait
I feel like as you go along the weight feels like less of a burden then you just let loose more
which makes for a great Geno piece...nice work my dude