Arid: There was some interesting lyricism here but not enough of a thematic picture. You seemed to be bounding with your rhymes, which does you no favors. This league tends to put content above all else.
CopyPat: This definitely wasn't your finest effort. Gone was the creativity you typically show in your storytelling. But your rhyme schemes were great as always. I like when you go with the shorter line structures. Your approach to the topic was basic and not all-encompassing, but the focus wins you the battle.
Vote: CopyPat
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