Interesting...I enjoyed
Zyg, you brought your usual flair to the battle and its great
you portray such a crisp view on the image that you use
and the technical aspect of how you 'write' adds more wit
I feel like you shine great when the topic plays to your advantage
the best part is you kept a consistent lock on your style & it makes the topic.shine
nice work my dude
NYC, You also used the same pic as Zyg which edges this close
because what Zyg does with words you add more imagery
I feel your piece really showcases the extremes of your style
it adds an element that pushes your verse beyond most others
and that really adds that 'extra' seasoning a verse usually needs
either way you did a great job here
V/ I'm kind of hung up on this battle both writers are great
there were hardly any flaws in the flow of their pieces
and they both made the vibe so consistent its ridiculous
alas there can only be one...and I'm going to have to go with...
NYC...something about his verse just sticks out for me...
I'm not saying Zyg had a bad verse hell they were evenly matched here
and I feel like who did it best this time is NYC the vibe is slick
the storytelling is nice
great battle
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