Both are pretty descriptive. Arid had a sort of cliched multiple rhyming going on (underground - dumb it down etc + landscape - damn day etc). It wasn't bad but it doesn't compare well against Copypat's longer multiple rhymes on a strictly technical level. Also, I didn't really get any strong connection from Arid's writing to the topic, it was more train of thought rather than a focused effort. Copypat went for a simple straightforward approach and executed nicely. Voting for Copypat.
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