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I have not been active, but when I se ur OM as top post in front page, I feel compelled
Not ur best peice, but far from bad
U set the bar high for urself though, and this u already know
The style, scheme, and delivery (the way I read it) was different from ur norm, more bled thoughts, not that it didnt work, bc it did just varyied from the norm, which is cool.
What I truly enjoy about ur writing is how u get these deep thoughts expressed though being brief af
Less is more with u, and u do it very well
The lines that resonated the most with me...were
"fire and friendship the same. they're only what you sustain"
"i couldn't sell my soul but there's a market for shame"
..and ur closer
Def enjoyable, and I am happy I peeped.
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