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Old 11-18-2014, 06:20 PM   #9
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Both writers really brought a special something to this battle
I really enjoy reading both of you which makes this a tough decision

Dom, your verse was amazing to say the least, the way it plays out was smooth
I feel like you did a great job on using your topic and made it work to your advantage
and after scrolling down to see where you hold up, I see the bets are against you
which makes me sad because you really had a great idea for a topic and made it work
you did a great job portraying your piece as you did, nice work my dude

dead, I feel like you had a great verse as well, there is no telling where your verses will take me
and I feel like you really had a chance to shine as far as how your writing goes...
your lyrical acrobats really shine when it's time too, nice work my dude

v/Dead, he had a quick verse but at the same time a smooth classic in a compact verse
both great writers and really a great battle all together...if anything I feel like this should go in Dom's favor
but at the same time you have to pick the one that is most fluent in writing form
hence...black
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